Dear Brian and Christine readers, I spent 5 hours last night reading through Books One and Two of B&C and see that I have a lot of editing and some rewriting to do, as I expected. I'll read Book Three tonight and then fix the whole thing. When I'm done I'll post the whole story, in one grand lump, on my journal Vagabond Tales.
http://db-vagabondtales.blogspot.com/. In the meantime I think I'm going to write a one-act play about two young lovers who are breaking up and not breaking up.